Awe

I kept the original lighting as it gave a sense that the composition was on the cusp of outdoor and indoor

I like the heavy shadow on the face and the low-key highlights on parts of the face

I also like the sense that somebody is standing next to her (you can see part of a coat) but her complete absorption in what she is viewing has made her totally oblivious of this person

I also like the large expanse of brick wall above her head as it gives a sense of scale and distance to the object/s she is looking at